love it. XD

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Syd Barrett (6 January 1946 – 7 July 2006)

goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

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Thaaaaaaaaaanks! ^^

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Thanks ^^

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I like it. Pose, expression, both nice. And the unnecessary exposure.

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Yay for unnecessary exposure! XD

jk. The reason why she's half naked is that I spent like an eternity trying to get the body outline right. And after I finally got the basic outline sorted I just don't feel like adding on the clothes. >_<

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Well, okay.

Trying for ol' Soty's style? God, that spaz needs to update, and more of an update than just telling us "Ohhh, I'm poor, nobody pays me!"kinda update.

God, just put the commission in your desk drawer and move on!

Okay, critique. Well, your upper body is magnificent, although y'could use a little differential between t3h b00bz and the torso, just to show they're not a single unit, but two interlinked ones, b00b and torso.

Torso files down to the hips nicely...hey, perhaps, with hips that size, y'should show a slight curve of the hamstring meeting the thigh trailing up into the gap. Y'know. That hentai kinda stuff. (What Aries Is Really Thinking: Baby needs back!!)

Y'definitely need more definition on the kneecaps. Your anatomy is really not that far off, and where it is, y'can get away with it. But we need to see that there's a bone on top of that knee joint, and just how muscled it is.

This is a perfect excuse to ask your female friends, or, in some cases, real girlfriends, to let you stare at their knees. *grins.* Use it.

Also, Aries's opinion is that the angle on that left boot heel is a bit too sharp. The foot is pretty good. The heel needs a little tackling, Aries isn't quite sure how.

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*Takes notes* 8D

Your critique is by far one of, if not THE most useful critique I've got.

Differentiate t3h b00b and the torso? I'm afraid I don't really understand what you're trying to say. Srry english isn't my first language. >_< And what's that thing about hamstring? I know it's a muscle but I don't quite understand the second bit... never seen hentei pic before... What can I say? I'm just THAT innocent.

As for the knee cap bit, I do admit that I don't have enough understanding about the human/furry skeletal and muscle anatomy since I've never ever studied them. I learnt drawing from observing other ppl's art and trial and error. I'll pay more attention to that part next time.

Yeah, I really wish soty could update some pics too. Sure that other guy's being a bit of an ass not paying soty. But truthfully I don't think that should stop him from posting other stuffs that he has already drawn. But that's just me.

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Looks like she's becoming more of a lioness then a cat