Colours are cool!

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Indeedy do they are! Thanks for the fave! *hugs*

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No problem.

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ooh, it does look much nicer in colour, the sparkles are a nice effect

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so why did you choose to keep the hair color th same. Their a bit of discrepancies in the second to last and last frame, the bridge/top of the nose are different colors of fur. Other then that its very sharp.

Did you have some thought in mind for the story of the pic?

Form me i keep thinkng "averange joe by day! College Librarian cheetah morph girl by night!"

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The coloring doesn't look as half-assed as you claim; it's not the most detailed coloring job, but it's clear coloring with a good choice of colors. The shadowing and such isn't very well defined, which I assume is why you call it "half-assed", but it still gets the point across.

My least favorite panel is number 3. The face seems a little off, for some reason. Of course with the anthro morph, there's always a problem with the face transition looking a bit bizarre at some point, so maybe that's all it is.

My favorite panel is either 1 or 5. Both are inredibly solid. I like your choice of clothing in panel 1; simple, but just complex enough to be interesting. In 5, on the other hand, the facial expression is very well done. Both have very solid posture and proportions.

As for the TF itself, the little "waves" of magic are a nice touch. I also like that the yellow waves apparently change the clothing color and minorly alter it, while the lone pink wave actually changes the pants into a skirt.

Someone already mentioned the fur-color-change on the nose from 4 to 5. Aside from that, the only inconsistency I see is that the shoes just kind of vanish from 4 to 5. Which raises the larger question of why the shoes are treated apart from the rest of the clothing; while the feet are apparently growing and ripping out of the shoes, the rest of the clothing is magically changing. Why didn't the shoes just magically change or vanish?

In any case, it's a very good sequence.

I hope that's enough critique for you ^^.

Oh that's excellent critiques! Thank you so much! ^^ And yeah, that is indeed what I meant when I said "half-assed" I didn't actually sit down and try studying the light source and all that, so the shading is very shaky indeed.

As for the shoes, I was gonna add in those "magic rings" that changed her cloths, but for some reason I must've forgot, the original idea is that it sort of just "breaks-down." But well, I got careless.... <

Panel 3 I really have no excuse actually. I wanted to show the changing skull shape, but I failed somewhat miserably.

Anyways, thanks a lot for the critique dude/girl, I just hope the next time I draw I won't be doing such a rushed job and actually pay more attention to the details and such. ._.

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You know what... I didn't even see that discrepancy you spoke of, thanks for pointing that out. @_@;

As for stories, as always I don't really have anything in mind, it really is just a spontaneous, unexplained tf. So yeah... >>

Thanks a lot for the comment and fave though. ^.^

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Oh yeah, I forgot the mention, that fur colour thing is entirely my bad... I must've been very tired. ._. *excuses*

And also, thanks a lot for the fave. ^^ I really love your pics and I think your most recent sequence is absolutely wonderful. It's ever so encouraging when an artist I adore faves my stuff...

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